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LibelluleExtraordinaire1301

Hi

I wrote a text and I need help if I need to change or correct something.Can u check it plsss

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Andréa C

Hello,

Thank you for your question!

The main suggestion is to not repeat the same words too many times. Indeed, you can try replacing them by pronouns or other nouns/adjectives/verbs. I will give you some examples on how to replace the words.

You can learn more about pronouns by clicking on the link below.

https://www.alloprof.qc.ca/fr/eleves/bv/anglais/pronouns-a0103#

Instead of repeating the title, you could write: ''We named our clique this way, because...''.

Or again, say ''(...) being couch potatoes and becoming the fanciest ones (...)''.

You can also switch up the word potato by saying for example ''this vegetable''.

Keep in mind, these are just suggestions to ease the reading.

To understand how to capitalize the words in a title, visit the link below.

https://www.alloprof.qc.ca/fr/eleves/bv/anglais/capitalization-a0127

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Read the rest of the notes that I left you and change a few things.

Please come back if you wish to make some things clearer of if you have other questions!

When in doubt, you can also ask a friend or teacher to verify your text.

Have a wonderful evening.

PythonBeta9625

wow i think ur text is awesome u should keep it and dont change anything

i like it

(i hope yall succeed in what yall want)