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Secondaire 4 • 4aBonjour,
est-ce que pour la phrase « One of Harold’s special talentswastuning out the voice of his wife. », le sujet est « one of Harold’s special talents « ?
merci en avance
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Primaire 5 • 4acomment se connecter surSpellers
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Secondaire 4 • 4aBonjour,
j’ai écrit un stand-up comedy in English. Est-ce que vous pouvez m’aider à corriger les erreurs grammaticales et me dites si c’est intéressant ou non?
merci et bonne journée
Title: prejudice of appearance
It's very difficult to be a normal-looking girl. It's like you're doing nothing right. If you don´t dress up, people say there are no ugly women, only lazy ones. Before this sentence appeared, I was just a simple ugly woman. If you do something bad, people will say your heart is ugly, so your face is ugly. If you are very kind, people will say that we don't judge a person by their appearance . If I say I think I'm pretty, people will say can't you afford a mirror? If I say I think I am ugly, people will say you should accept yourself.
And everyone's photos on facebook are so pretty! When can we post something that shows our individuality without involving beauty or ugliness? For example, fingerprints.
Because of my inferiority complex in appearance, I gave up a lot of things. Don't run for the student council, you won't get elected (as we all know, running is a beauty pageant). Don't pursue him, it will definitely be fruitless. Don't rob the bank, you will be caught on surveillance camera, I'm not photogenic.
But having an appearance like mine is not without benefits. I always show weakness, act like a spoiled child, and eat ice cream from boys without permission. But no one would call me b word . She was just hungry.
The last time I went to a beauty store with my mom, the clerk recommended hand cream to me. She said do you know, the hands are really important.’' They are the second face of a woman. I said who can save my first face. She said that cosmetics are all 20% off today. A beautiful woman next to me was not happy, why is she 20% off and I have nothing? the staff said: You just need a depilatory cream, but she needs everything except that.
The world is very real to ordinary people, you must have a function to have the value of existence. But beautiful girls only need to exist. When you see an eye Candy, you won't think like: this Candy, what kind of nutrition does it contain?
We all know that the world is different for beautiful people and ordinary people, and if you didn't know it, you know it now. Not even death can erase the difference. In the 1980s, two 3,800-year-old female human remains were unearthed in western China. People named them Loulan Beauty and Mummy II. This is actually made up by me, but you do think it is particularly reasonable, right?
It's just that I think we ordinary people are usually too low-key. We all think I'm like this, so stop posting selfies. This has created a survivorship bias, which has made the internet littered with pictures of beautiful women. We feel that beauty is normal. To be honest, before coming to Canada, I always believed that Canada was a non-immigrant country with only blondes and blue eyes
In order to change this, I think our normal-looking person should post photos and make the beauties feel ashamed. I believe that as long as one day we unite and have the courage to show ourselves, one day people will stop looking at Facebook
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Primaire 4 • 4aEst ce que on dit dont stop en anglais ou don't stop et sa ve dire quoi en anglais you have
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Secondaire 5 • 4aHi,
What is the corpus callosum in the teenage brain?
Thank you! :)
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Secondaire 5 • 4aHi,
We are learning about the teenage brain and I want to know what does pruning and myelination means.
Can I please have a clear explanation of these two terms?
Thank you! :)
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Secondaire 1 • 4aje ne comprends pas l’exercice où sa dit
Highlight the verb and rewrite the sentence with be going to.Use contractions where possible
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Primaire 6 • 4aSalut, je dois faire un mini texte avec des feeling verb en anglais mais je ne trouve pas une liste avec tous c'est verbe . Si possible m'en dire 7
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Primaire 5 • 4aBonjour je me demandais comment dire il y a des fruits sur la table en Anglais. J'aurais besoin d'aide s'il-vous-plaît.
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Secondaire 1 • 4aj'ai de la difficulté a mettre les adjectif dans le bonne ordre dans les phrases svp j'ai besion d'aide
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Primaire 6 • 4aBonjour, je suis en 6 année et j'ai un devoir d'anglais dans mon GETTING BETTER IN GRAMMAR au il faux que je transforme un adjectives en INFERIORITY, EQUALITY et SUPERIORITY mais il y a just très gros problème car je ne comprend vraiment pas ce concept mais vraiment mais vraiment pas
pouvais-vous m'aidai a apprend le concept S.V.P
just m'expliquer le concept rien de plusse
MERCI ! MERCI ! MERCI ! MERCI !
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Primaire 5 • 4aBonjour, est-ce que vous pouvez me donner une astuce pour que mon amie GalaxieTurbo9583 puisse apprendre l'anglais vite parce que elle a besoin de l'aide a aprendre le anglais sil vous plaît.! et merci beaucoup monsieu ou madame.
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Primaire 3 • 4aJ'ai du mal à écrire en anglais. Pouvez-vous me conseiller des exercices à faire sur l'ordinateur pour m'aider ?
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Secondaire 1 • 4aHier j'ai acheté un nouveau jeu video il est en anglais de base et les sous-titre ne fonctionnent plus a cause d'un bug alors je me demandais si je pouvais avoir un mini cours ?
Merci
Alexandre
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Primaire 5 • 4acomment je fais pour trouver le devoir que ma prof ma envoyer
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Primaire 3 • 4avous pouver maider sur l`anglais
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Primaire 4 • 4aJ'écoute parfois mes parents parler en anglais et je n'y conprend rien. Je me trouve nulle.
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Primaire 6 • 4aBonjour je me demandais que je dois faire pour être mieux préparée a une compréhension de lecture en anglais le 20 janvier vue je ne suis vraiment pas bonne en anglais.
merci
AmandeTendre🤔
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Secondaire 1 • 4abonsoir allo prof est ce que je pourrais recevoir un ficher pour ameliorer mon englais et comprendre ce que dise mes amis en englais merci d avance ALLO PROF
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Secondaire 4 • 4aBonjour,
Pouvez vous m’aider encore une fois à corriger mon texte anglais, SVP?
Merci
Chinese Traditional Festival
a little presentation of winter solstice
The last day of school, December 22, is not only a sign of relaxation but also a Chinese traditional festival— winter solstice(or Dongzhi). This historical festival involves some customs that people still practice today. Let's take a look at it together.
The source of this festival goes back to ancient times. The ancient Chinese created 24 solar terms according to Natural rhythm changes. Winter solstice, which has the shortest day and the longest night, is the second term. Since the Han dynasty, People began to consider this day as a festival. According to them, this day is a “lucky day” because the winter solstice signifies the return of the sun. Since this solar term, The height of the sun begins to rise, and the daytime begins to increase. So, Chinese ancestry celebrated this day for the sun's rebirth and the augmentation of “Yang''(according to yin yang philosophy, yang is a positive energy that is good for health and raised by the sun’s height. )This antique festival passes through several dynasties and continues to be celebrated by China.
In different Chinese regions, the winter solstice involves radically different customs. But there is one thing in common in whole China - a time for families to get together. On this day, families in southern China will make sesame tang yuan ( glutinous rice balls) that symbolize reunion and eat them. But, in northern China, more people eat dumplings. Northerners believe that eating ear-shaped dumplings can prevent the ears from freezing. Some Chinese who have the Veneration of the dead would visit their ancestors’ graves and pay their respects by worshipping. So, all Chineses celebrate the winter solstice, but in different ways.
Winter solstice occurs in an important place in Chinese tradition. Every Chinese person, no matter their geographical location, remembers this day and celebrates it in their way with their family. Are you interested in this festival? Eat sesame tang yuan or dumplings!
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Secondaire 4 • 4aBonsoir,
j’ai écrit un texte anglais. Est-ce que vous pouvez m’aider à corriger les erreurs grammaticales et vérifier les structures d’introduction, de body et de conclusions, SVP?
Merci infiniment,
Dildora
Assignment
Magazine/Newspaper (PART 2)miglan1 miglan1
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24 nov.
25 points
Date limite : Demain
PART 2 - Writing an ArticleWord Count & Content:Write a 300 - 350 word article on a topic of your choice - Arts & Culture, Politics, Current Events, Sports, Fashion, School News, Teen Issues, Food & Cuisine. Title (& Subtitle)Your article must have an original title (& subtitle).AudienceYour reading audience is your high school.Illustrations (Optional)You can also include an illustration(s).
mon texte
Chinese traditional festival
a little presentation of winter solstice
The last day of school, December 22, is not just a sign of relaxation, but also a Chinese traditional festival— winter solstice(or Dongzhi). This historic festival involves some customs that people continue to practice until now. Let's take a look at it together.
The source of this festival goes back to ancient times. The ancient Chinese created 24 solar terms according Natural rhythm changes. Winter solstice, which has the shortest day and the longest night, is the second term. Since dynastie Han dynasty, People began to consider this day as a festival. According to them, this day is a “lucky day” because the winter solstice is the starting point for the return of the sun. Since this solar term, the sun's height has risen and the daylight has increased day by day. So, Chinese ancestry celebrated this day for the sun's rebirth and the sun's round-trip movement entered a new cycle. This antique festival passes through several dynastie and continues to be celebrated by China.
In different Chinese regions, the winter solstice involves radically different customs. But there is one thing in common in the whole China - a time for families to get together. On this day, families in southern China will make glutinous rice balls which symbolize reunion and eat them. But, in northern China, more people eat dumplings. Northerners believe that eating ear-shaped dumplings can prevent the ears from freezing. Some Chinese who have Veneration of the dead would visit their ancestors’ graves and pay their respects by worshipping. So, chineses celebrate the winter solstice, but in different ways.
Winter solstice occurs in an important place in Chinese tradition. Every Chinese person, no matter their geographical location, remembers this day and celebrates it in their own way with their family. Are you interested in this festival? Eat glutinous rice balls or dumplings!
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Primaire 5 • 4aBonjour je m'appelle Galaxie et jai des problem avec l'anglais j'aurais besoin de l'aide
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Secondaire 4 • 4aBonjour, je dois répondre en anglais à un questionnaire à propos du film Green Mile et je ne sais pas la réponse d'une question. Est ce que vous pouvez m'aider. John Coffey says, " He killed them with their love, " and goes on to explain that it happens all the time all over the world. What does he means ?
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Primaire 5 • 4aje suis bonne dans toute les matière sauf l'anglais. comment m'amilioré en anglais
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Secondaire 5 • 4aBonjour j'ai des exercices de grammaire et j'ai besoin d'aide. Voici ceux ou j'ai le plus de difficulté.
My roommate ______________ (leave) by the time I got out of bed.
Ce qu'on doit faire:
Write the correct form of the verb. You may use the past perfect, present perfect, or future perfect.
J'hésite entre had left et will have left
Pour ceux-ci ma réponse a un x à coté mais je ne suis pas sûr
______________ became extinct over 4,000 years ago.(5 points)
A woolly mammoth
The woolly mammoth
x Woolly mammoth
A group of scientists at Harvard University is leading ___________ to bring back the species.(5 points)
attempt
x an attempt
the attempts
the attemp
The scientists have been trying to create ___________ that is part elephant, part mammoth for several years.(5 points)
the hybrid embryo
x a hybrid embryo
hybrid embryo
The doorman warned us (not, go) ______________________ backstage after the concert.(5 points)
to not go
x not to go
to not go on to
not to going
Jasmine decided to wear the earrings _______ matched her pearl pendant necklace.(5 points)
that
x , which
Merci beaucoup!
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Secondaire 1 • 4abonjour je me demandait si vous pouviez me donner des stratégies pour lire ou écrire les textes en anglais
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Secondaire 4 • 4aBonsoir,
je viens d’écrire un text anglais. Est-ce que vous pouvez m’aidez à le corriger et l’améliorer SVP? Merci.
Assignment
Part 1 - Title Competition
- You need to come up with an original title for the magazine/newspaper.
- You need to write a 100 - 250 word marketing pitch to sell your title to your classmates.
- You must submit a written copy to Mr. Migliara by Friday, December 10th.
- The audience for the Magazine/Newspaper is your school (ESMR).
- The Magazine will offer commentary on a broad range of topics:
(i) Arts & Culture
(ii) Politics
(iii) Current Events
(iv) Sports
my text
Title:One For All The title that I gave my school magazine isOne For All.In order for you all to better understand why I use this topic, I will explain it in detail in the following part of text.
Our school is a French-speaking school, so the English proficiency of students varies. Some of them´s mother tongue is English, while the others can only use English for basic communication. Their contrasting levels makes them interpret this title quite distinctly. For English beginners, they may think this is a collection of all the school topics (sports, art, politics, etc.)since this is a school magazine. But, for English masters, they will figure out this is an expression(even though juste the first part) and the meaning “Each individual should act for the benefit of the group” of it.
The second interpretation reflects the value of altruism that is central to the IB program of our school and also of my school magazine. Because this magazine will help customers to gain the connaissance of different topics even though you buy it just for one specific subject. For example, somebody who buys this magazine for gossip may find out that the politic section is quite attractive and improve his connaissance on it. Beside, all the money earned by the magazine will be donated to school. This will provide free lunches for needy students.
If you are interested in your school´s news(of course you are) and want to give a hand to the others who need, choose this title and buy my magazine please!
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Secondaire 4 • 4aBonsoir,
mon devoir d’anglais est d’écrire un titre pour school magazine et d’écrire un petit texte pour expliquer pourquoi ce titre est bon. Est-ce que vous pouvez m’aider à corriger mes fautes grammaires, SVP?
Merci et bonne soirée,
Dildora.
The assignment
Part 1 - Title Competition
- You need to come up with an original title for the magazine/newspaper.
- You need to write a 100 - 250 word marketing pitch to sell your title to your classmates.
- You must submit a written copy to Mr. Migliara by Friday, December 10th.
- The audience for the Magazine/Newspaper is your school (ESMR).
- The Magazine will offer commentary on a broad range of topics:
(i) Arts & Culture
(ii) Politics
(iii) Current Events
(iv) Sports
Ce que j’ai écrit
Title:One For Allexplanation: The title that I gave my school magazine isOne For All.Personally, I think this title is very fascinating and interesting because different people will have different interpretations of it. If somebody doesn't know the meaning of this expression, then he or she will think that this title means a magazine that contains all the topics relative to school life, such as art & culture, politics, current events and sports. If somebody knows this expression which signifies each individual should act for the benefit of the group, then he or she will understand that this title presents the altruism value of the IB program of our school. So, this is why I wroteOne For Allfor the magazine title and I hope all of you like it.
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Primaire 4 • 4aje suis très nul en anglais et j'ai vraiment besoin d aide
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Secondaire 5 • 4aAllo!
J'ai un peu de difficulté avec ma phrase.
"If you have social media for quite a long time, then you must’ve heard of the man who sued McDonald’s only because he was still depressed after eating his happy meal".
J'hésite entre ces temps de verbes dessus, et "you have been on social media [...]". Aussi, est-elle trop longue?
Merci!
